Life of the Comment

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What is that New Messages button doing there?? Is it taunting me?? After reading LionHearts excerpt I begin to believe it!

Submitted: March 09, 2008

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Well here I go, another day of struggling with my muse to finish a couple more chapters of one of my books "Crash and Burn" I hope. I click onto the 'New Messages' button (knowing Booksie would have sent an e-mail if I had any) and stare at the 'no new messages' written in grey. So why is it the silly thing doesn't disappear when I read and comment back? Bah... I scroll about my short friends list and bang my head on the table.

The only comments I get on a regular basis go something like this "aaaayyyeeeemamamamaeeebbaaahhhh" from my child laying in the wonderful invention of a portable crib as he grins and tells me he loves me in his own way and tells me 'if they won't talk ta ya and tell you they care if you keep going, why not play with me instead? I love you, I think your great!' I laugh and get distracted again cause I figure the last comment I got besides one from my wonderful co-writer is over a month old and barely tells me what they liked and wanted to see.

My muse is fickle. He thumbs at his own work and goes "Well, I wrote five pages, and gave you the next chapters name, now I need to ponder for four more days... a page a day is all I need!" stupid muse! ::squishes fairy sized dragon:: I see myself on the top twenty (thanks to my co-writer voting for me) and smile in thanks, but think to myself "Well appearantly one book was the only huge fan collector I'll ever have and I've already finished and started revising it! No one wants to re-read a book on booksie.. >.< it's too time consuming.... ::play with son::

I have decided at least one of us in my little family accomplishes his daily goals... not me, not my fiance.. no... my son... whose only goals are world domination through cuteness.. ahh well... one department store at a time >.>


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