Poem by: Ice Winifr3d
night, sky, stars, hands, mankind, fade, limits
Submitted: March 03, 2011
© Copyright 2016 Ice Winifr3d. All rights reserved.
thanks for reading! :D I appreciate it!
Gadzookziie Spice 99
i think this is... very powerful. i think that sometimes you can exceed the sky and be among the stars :]
I'm glad you liked it. :)
Hey I like the message in this poem! :D It was short and sweet and you made your point- it was really powerful. :) Keep writing, you're good.
thanks so much! I'm glad you like it! :D
Short but sweet
That was actually really inspirational to me
Thank you :)
You're welcome! I'm glad i could give you some imspiration :)
Short and sweet. :) it got my vote. :D
p.s. HI just posted 4 new poems (my broken mirror, wonder, bizarre thoughts,killing emotions) I would highly appriciate it if you looked at them and rated. Thanks a bunch! :)
Sure and thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it! :D
Short sweet and straight to the point. Nice job:)
thanks. :) i appreciate the read and the comment.
I love it! It's great! I thought that maybe by the length it might not be good but quality not quantity, right? It was very inspirational and is helping me through a troubled time!
I'm so glad it helped you! I too agree: quality is not quantity lol thanks for reading! :) i'm so glad you liked it
Short, sweet, simple, encouraging, what more do I need say? Very fine piece here. Be sure to check my writing aswell!
thanks for commenting and I sure will! :D I'm glad you liked it!
This is good! I would have liked to see more of it, more details or whatever, but otherwise it's really good! I rate it a 7 out of 10!
thanks! I thought that the shorter, the better, ya know? Ha! Thanks for commenting! I'll return the favor! :D
I just thought this was really sweet and encourageing
Excellent poem, I find to easy to read, flows well, descriptive and meaningful content
'The sky is your limit but i aim pass the stars.'
Without a vision the people perish!
'But when you doubt yourself every little glimpse you fade.'
So very true!
'I’ll show you that I can fly pass the stars when you least expected.'
Leave the beaten path sail the uncharted seas, take the high road!
'I will have passed.'
Such is a true pioneer!Fantastic job!
thanks so much! I'm glad the message got out and was clear to you! :)
Good. My suggestion would be to add an introductory clause to the last line, such as, "By the time you look up..."
Thanks for the tip! :)
Omg this is amazing i like the meaning of it :)
thanks so much!! xD
it is short but encouraging one,,keep it up
Ralphie A Burcke
Lovely poem! But don´t you mean: fly past the stars?
thanks for reading. the line there doesn't make sense?
A short but well thougt piece of writing revealing that you can achieve whatever you want. I truly hope that after you have passed the stars, you indeed reach the sky.
thanks and I'm glad that the message got out clearly! :D
NICE SHORT AND SHARP WITH A POWERFUL MESSAGE LIKE IT VERY MUCH ^_^
thanks a bunch! glad you do!
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