Poem by: icebelly
Submitted: November 15, 2008
On a sunny day.
It watches the bees
dance in the sun,
Then glides a way in
The wind of the
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A love the deep attitude hidden behind the simple words. Again, a marvelous piece.
Thanks you. You really like it. I worte it for school in the sring.
This reminds me of the old saying "If March comes in like a lamb it will go out like a lion with the wind." This poem rang true to the saying. Very lovely short!
Thanks that means alot.
Talk about short and sweet. Loved it! Great job, never give up!!
Thanks that is what I try for.
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