Patina

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

A sad tale of humanity's losing fight with nature on a planet in a far-off star system.


Submitted: December 31, 2008

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ignominius

This is a very short story born of a 5 minute writing exercise. Although it's short I am sure that many will like it. Let me know what you think, good or bad!

Wed, December 31st, 2008 12:23am

Sixbells

I liked writing style, it kept me guessing. It also got me thinking on what was written on the plaque? It would be a good start to any short story, grips you from the first few lines. It kind of does the Scene and Sequel pattern back to front and it works well! I hope you expand this story

Fri, January 2nd, 2009 4:22pm

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