Patina

ignominius

This is a very short story born of a 5 minute writing exercise. Although it's short I am sure that many will like it. Let me know what you think, good or bad!

Sixbells

I liked writing style, it kept me guessing. It also got me thinking on what was written on the plaque? It would be a good start to any short story, grips you from the first few lines. It kind of does the Scene and Sequel pattern back to front and it works well! I hope you expand this story