To My Baby.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

My lame attempt to write something sweet about/to my boyfriend.
This one, I typed on here, I also have another one "You're my entire life" Help me decide which is better!!

Girls always go from guy to guy
And supposedly love everyone of them.
But I'm not like those girls.
I'm actually in love with you.

You always know how to make everything alright.
I know I'm young,
But I'm living in hopes of one day
Becoming your wife.

Without you, I wouldn't be here.
When I had no one to count on,
You were always there.
Even when I made the worst decisions.

I'm sorry for everything I've put you through.
I don't know why you've stayed by my side this long
But I'm working on changing my bad habits so I never lose you
You mean everything to me, I hope you know that.


Submitted: August 30, 2009

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justagirl67

i really like this, and i'm very cynical, so this is saying something! the writing's simple and straightforward, and very good.

Sun, August 30th, 2009 7:13pm

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Haha thanks(:

Sun, August 30th, 2009 1:32pm

Froodle

this is very touching. i think we can all relate to the feeling of love, especially when one speaks of teenage love. Although i too agree that it lacks imagery, it nevertheless got its point across and well centred into the hearts of those who read it =] good job

Sun, August 30th, 2009 11:08pm

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Thanks(:

Sun, August 30th, 2009 6:55pm

Phoebe Gardens

It's very cute! I like it, except don't change your flaws! They're what makes you you! Only my opinion though! Lol!
It is very true and sets my mind thinking again about love and all that jazz that comes with it! Lol! :D

Wed, September 2nd, 2009 8:12am

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Haha thanks.(:

Wed, September 2nd, 2009 5:43am

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