Short Story by: IMAD UL ISLAM
Genre: Flash Fiction
death, trees, tears, autumn, cruel
Submitted: November 22, 2012
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Hello there :)
So, I saw your reading request and went here as fast as I could. To be honest, I didn't really like reading short stories. But I gave it a try and it's really good. I love how you used the season of autumn to the boy's life. Love how you described everything really well. It's like you're painting a thousand images with your words, which is really amazing.
Even though this was a short one, it still have a clear message of what you're trying to say. I could feel all the emotions you've poured out on this one. I must say that apart from being a poet, you're a great story teller too. :) You're a very talented guy. Good job! Thank you for inviting me here. Have a great day, Imad!
xx K. C. S p a r k s
I wrote this one in just 10 minutes! It is for a story contest(not on BOOKSIE). I am as always absolutely thankful to you for such a magnificent and precious comment. It really means a lot to me. I am really sorry for not being able to read your novel. I will (inshallah) read it someday. If you have got any new poem(s) let me know. Thanks a lot for frequent commenting and encouraging me. Have a greatest day, everyday!!! IMAD~~ :]
I like this story you really played with emotions here. Poor boy...
I am glad you liked it. Thanks very much for taking your time in reading and leaving your comment. Have a nice day. Regards:]
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You do a good job with portraying emotions and feelings in a lot of your work, I like it. This was also a good parallel between the season and grief.
Thanks a lot for leaving such kind words. Thanks for taking your time in reading and commenting. Have a nice day:]
I was looking around randomly for new authors to read. Then I stumbled here and even though I am not a fan of shirt stories, this was simply beautiful in a melacholy way. I was impressed by your method of comparing the little boy's sense of dread to the season. There was vivd imagery and the actual atmosphere, the feeling of the story was simoly tangible. It really touches the reader. A great story; Keep Writing,
Thanks very much for leaving by my page and giving it a read. Thanks again for leaving such a great comment. Regards:)
Very, very heart-touching. Reminds me of my loved ones. Yet, autumn is my favorite season. I lost my dearest uncle in spring...the season of happiness!
Ooooops.....Thanks for the read and for the comment of course!! But you haven't read my best story "GONE WITH THE WIND"..written on 12/12/12!!! Thanks soooo much for reading my works and providing me your precious comments...Regards:)
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