(FINAL PART) RUNNING FROM DANGER

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

AVA RAN AWAY TO GET AWAY FROM A CRAZED STALKER. WILL SHE BE SAFE? OR HAS HER TIME RAN OUT?

Ava's mind wasn't on shopping, but on Neal Holland. He was tall dark and handsome. His smile could be irritating or knock your socks off. She knew she shouldn't be thinking about him at all. She needed to remain focused, make a plan. The stalker had found her, she didn't know how. She did know that he would come for her, she just didn't know when. By the time she'd made it back to the cabin it was dark out. She hadn't ment to stay gone so long, but on her way back she spotted a paw shop. Ava had sold her locket in order to by a gun.

Ava wrapped her hand around the gun, it felt strange. She fumbled with the door keys in her free hand. She finally unlocked the door and immediately knew he had been back. She walked in and flipped the lamp on. The flurescent light flooded the room. Her eyes moved rapidly about the room. She moved on to the bedroom.Her heart was pounding wildly in her chest. She could hear the beat in her ears, it felt as if it was about to explode from her body. She flipped the light on, nothing. Maybe she was just being paranoid. Ava glanced toward the bathroom and that's when she saw it,a black nightie hung on the shower rod. A red lip stick note was on the bathroom mirror. MY BEAUTIFUL SWAN I'M COMING FOR YOU! YOU TRIED TO OUT SMART ME HAVING THE PLASTIC SURGERY, DIDN'T YOU? I SHOULD HAVE TOOK YOU THE LAST TIME I SAW YOU IN NEW YORK. I'M COMING SOON! THE NIGHTIE IS FOR YOU! DON'T WORRY I GOT A LARGER SIZE.

Ava turned violently ill. She was trembling. Her hand went to touch the locket that was know longer there. She fell to her knees. "Randy, I need you," she cried.

She was angry. No not angry, furious was more like it. She wanted her life back. Ava stood and snatched the nightie from the hanger and ripped it. She turned and wiped vigorlously to remove the lip stick from the mirror. That's when she saw the picture in the sink. Her blood rushed to her head. She turned pale. Ava was know longer in the cabin, her mind had traveled back to her school years. Ava had befriended Frank Mayo. Frank was known as the school geek. He had stringy brown hair. His chin was pointed, and his ears had stood out like dumbo the elephant. He had been like a brother she'd never had. Frank had always wanted the relationship to go futher, but she had never felt the same as him.

"Frank Mayo is the stalker," she said it, but still couldn't believe it. She closed her eyes for a moment trying to rationalize why he would be doing this.

A noise startled her. She held the gun in front as she peered around the bathroom door. She had to force herself to move futher. The cabin door was opened, she walked to it. Ava was crying now, she felt helpless even though she held a gun in her hand. "Frank, if your here show yourself!" she yelled. She waited, but know one appeared. Ava closed the door and locked it.

She felt something poke her back, she frozed. "Put the gun down," he said as he grabbed her from behind. The gun fell to the floor, he kicked it across the room. He slowly turned her to face him, he stood smiling.

"Neal, what's going on?" she asked, feeling confused.

"Kelly Rivers or should I say Ava? You mean you haven't figured it out yet?" he sneered. ""You was always a little on the dumb side," he added. "I may have been a geek, but I was always smart," he laughed.

"Frank?" Ava's throat felt dry as she spoke.

"Yeah, it's me beautiful swan." He laughed a hideouslaugh. Ava cringed at the sound. "Like my nose job? What about my chin lift? Have you noticed my ears no longer stick out? And let's not forget the buttock lift," he said as he rubbed his butt with his free hand.

Ava's eyes moved to the gun across the room. She had to wait till the opportune time to retrieve it. Frank's breathing had grown shallow. She could feel the hotness of his breath as he moved her toward the couch. He brought his lips close to hers. She tried to break free, but couldn't. His mouth came down hard on her lips, leaving them feeling bruised. He lowered her to the couch, and immediately climbed on top of her. Ava cried out. He laid the knife on the coffee table. He took both her hands and pressed them down on each side of her head. Frank moaned as his manhood grew hard.

Ava took that moment to bring up her knee and kick him in the groin. He fell back clutching his balls. She bound off the couch and ran toward the gun. He grabbed her feet, knocking her to the floor. She stretched her hand out. He started dragging her toward him. She grabbed hold of the gun and slid it underneath her. He rolled her over, and as he did Ava pointed the gun and shot him right between the eyes.The stalker was dead. Ava nelson would be no more. She decided she didn't want to be Kelly Rivers either. She would make a new life somewhere else, maybe as Jill Brown or Lilly Rogers. Who knows who she might be?


Submitted: June 11, 2010

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Vengie

I liked it. To be honest, if you are thinking about being a professional writer, I would suggest doing another proof read and edit. There are still quite a few spelling mistakes and the like (i.e. I got A LARGER SIZES instead of larger size etc.) but I think you did a really good job.

In what capacity do you work with children?

Feel free to check out my stuff if you can be bothered

Fri, June 11th, 2010 9:19pm

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THANKS FOR THE EXTRA SET OF EYES!! I EDIT AND EDIT, BUT STILL FIND MISTAKE! WILL REREAD AGAIN!

Sat, June 12th, 2010 12:53am

Vengie

It's easy to get lost in it, and be unable to see mistakes. With academic stuff, it gets to the point that I can't even understand it at all, let alone whether I've actually answered the question, or whether or not it is good!

I am studying Early Childhood Education, that is why I asked what job you do re: kids.

Sun, June 13th, 2010 9:08am

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RIGHT NOW I WORK AT A CHURCH DAY CARE AS A 3K KINDERGARTEN TEACHER!!!!

Sun, June 13th, 2010 3:26am

Donna Cavanagh

Very good story. I love suspense and mystery, so this was right up my alley. Great job.

Thu, June 17th, 2010 7:17pm

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THANK YOU SO MUCH

Fri, June 18th, 2010 10:08am

angellynn

Very Good! You should write more mystery/suspense. You are very good at it!
Angellynn:D

Sun, July 4th, 2010 6:08am

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THANKS SO MUCH!!

Sat, July 3rd, 2010 11:50pm

writerdude01

Great job, I absolutely loved your stroy

Thu, September 9th, 2010 3:26pm

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THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Thu, September 9th, 2010 9:20am

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