Thanks For The Memories

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Memoir  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a summary of the first relationship I had. I wrote this just to get my feelings out...

Thanks For The Memories

When I held her hand I felt a feeling like no other, a feeling I had never felt before. My chest would tighten like it was going to fall out of my body. When I put my arm around her, I was at peace. I felt like no matter what happened to me I would be okay. I felt like as long as my arm was around her life would be worth living.She was a tall girl with curvy body. She had milky white skin and her hair was dark as night. She had style and swagger when she was walked, the shades never left her face. She was not only was she beautiful but smart as well.

My fondest memory of her was the last day I saw her.Our relationship was long distance so I had to go through great lengths to see her.I caught two buses that took me to the mall, it took me two hours to get there. I got there before she did so I waited till she came. When she finally arrived I felt really happy and excited to be with her. She was wearing a teal colored shirt that complimented her skin perfectly. We then decided to see a movie together. While at the theater I look into her eyes as she looked into mine. slowly my head tilts at an angle as our lips touch. Her lips were a natural pink color, I was memorized by her beauty.Her lips tasted so sweet a taste like no other, I wanted to make ever second count. When the movie was over we went outside and as we stood there our lips met once again. I like the way she ran her hands through my hair and all over my body. I could keep my hands off of her, I had a tingling feeling all over my body. Time felt like it was passing by fast and I wanted to enjoy every second I spent with her. Sadly it came to an end and we went our separate ways. 

As I mentioned earlier our relationship was long distance. She would always say "I feel bad that you're so far away, I feel like I'm troubling you". I would then say "you're worth the trouble". Ever night I would text her and say "I miss you babe" and she would say "I miss you baby". When we both had to go to college the distance got further away.Before college started I texted her like I normally do but something felt wrong. I had a very bad feeling like something terrible was going to happen. I texted her saying " I miss you". I got no response this didn't seem like a big deal but something didn't feel right. The next day I get a text saying "We need to talk", and I feared those words. I then got a phone call and before I knew it, it was all over. I had a strange feeling. My chest tightened once again, but instead of a warm feeling it was a painful feeling. I felt like nothing mattered and for the next couple of months I ended up more depressed than I had ever been. Looking back at the memories I'm glad to have experienced them. Although the pain was unbearable at that time, I would not be who I'm today if weren't for the memories. 

 


Submitted: August 23, 2014

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KodamaKiss

I make notes as I go so here we go:
I cant believe you just said swagger haha I liked it though. I am aware of this feeling that you talk about in the first paragraph. I would have liked to read about the very first moment that you set eyes on her, when you stepped off the bus. You pushed that moment to after you two chose to go to the movies. You need more description. We need to talk…that is never good. I liked this and I’m sorry that she just ended it…with that being said, I feel like it could’ve been sadder if you described her more or the feelings that you had for her more. Nicely done though.

Sun, August 24th, 2014 1:06am

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Haha I was really debating whether or not I should write about when I first saw her. I kinda left it out on purpose but if people would find that interesting I could add it. I did have a lot of feeling for her I kept it as a summary but maybe I'll ad more detail into this. Thanks for reading I'll check out your poem.

Sat, August 23rd, 2014 6:49pm

smircle

I'm really not looking forward to the world of relationships and romance ;S It was sweet that you went through such lengths just to be with her-- not everyone can handle a long distance relationship, but you tried, which not a whole load of people can say. It wasn't very nice that she broke up with you over the phone like that-- she should've at least waited until you were face-to-face, but you took it in your stride. I liked the uplifting ending-- the quote "it's better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all" fits well here. It may hurt at the time, but memories will last a life time. Good job; keep writing! :)

Sun, August 24th, 2014 8:42pm

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Thank you I like the quote you shared with me. I'll try to write more and different things. I hope to write poetry, and some fictional stories in the future. So I'll have a wide variety of writings but thanks for reading I appreciate it.

Sun, August 24th, 2014 4:00pm

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