Poem by: Imagine Words
Submitted: May 31, 2011
Dreaming and dreaming of the sky
How Iwish to one day fly
Maybe then Ishall be free
Of locked shackles without a key
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Short and sweet, good rythm and rhyming.
Thank you :)
very poetic :)
Thank you ~~~ :D
Simple but effective :)
Very nice. Love the rhyme. Really good rhythm 'til the last line. Your words are battling there. If you'd trim it to "Of these shackles without key" or "Of locked shackles without key".
Thanks for the comment and I will try and change it when I have time thanks again :D
i like how it sounds and think it works with how short it is. it is short, strong and sweet. a perfect visual of something a lot of people think about.
Thank you :D
You don't imagine words, you feel words! I like your poem.
Love It! Soft, Musical, and beautiful!
This must be sweet,short and well written.
Thank you :D I'm really glad you liked it :D
I really like this. It's short but it still is greatly affective. Excellent pieces. ^_^
I love it! And I agree with zadudet1 it is short but very affective.
love this! BtW chapter 2 is up :)x
Thanks LOL and can't wait :D
Very nice and short poem I like it :) keep it up!
I like it!
I wish to be free as well :(
ONE DAY WE ALL SHALL BE FREE :D xoxo
LOL I hope so :D
very short, yet deep and meaningfull... I liked it :)
itz really short and sweet
this is great :) loove it!
A light-hearted work! I loveee it...
Kmu. Your friend, Arun..:)
great!!...short yes, but tells it all!
i like it!
Thank you I'm glad you liked it :D
i like this! :)
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