Poem by: Imagine Words
Submitted: May 19, 2011
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like it short but sweet, easy flow to it good work
Great piece of poem. Good flow of ideas. I like it. Check our my poem, Count Time.
ok :D thanks for the comment
Thank you ~~~ :D
It's SHORT , CUTE and CRISP and SIMPLE that everyone can understand!!!You've really brought out the feelings so well-compressed in such few lines which is generally difficult!!!HATS OFF : D
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concise and well written:D
Little Miss D
I loved it it`s awsome!
Short and sweet. To be honest, this is comparatively less better than your other works. And I meant not to discourage. No, never will I.
Yh I actually agree that this one wasn't good, I'm still trying to think of a way to make it sound better :)
It's really cute at the end when the person is like just my luck. I can imagine them sighing and putting their head down.
You have a knack for using short lines to express yourself, certainly something I am not the best at. It has a great message and smooth flow. Great job!
Thank you :D
This is great!
Keep up the good work!
I love the use of short lines and rhyming words which are used to create rhythm, flow and emphasis on the meaning of the poem.
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for commenting :D
Fix "chose" in the 4th line...that ain't a word! And what is it supposed ta' be? Choose or stay? That don't make sense neither! Good theme, though...always nice ta' read poems 'bout time.
Thanks for the constructive critism will try and sort it out soon :D
i like it, its short but has alot of emotion.
nyc poem..... keep writing :)
It's short, but it is not bad. It flows very easily inside and out *hugs* :D
Thank you I'm glad you liked it *hugs back* :D
Time Instills Memories Everlsting...tick, tick, tick...
Good read...to the point and creative...thanks for the read...TAGS...
Thanks for the comment :)
Nice and sweet little poem...
from d heart
Short n sweet....:)nice attempt
So many choices, so little time. The rhyme was really nice, it gave it a little ring to it. Short and sweet :)
Ty again :D
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