Bitter room

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

Told in the P.O.V of someone who is not what she appears to be untill the end. This is very small about 1 paragraph.

A bitter cold settles in the room, and a sense of anger and many regrets from the forlorn linger, in this damned room, my room. It brings no confort to know that I am alone in this place, only silence and an akward stillness, within the area I reside in, acompany me. Such a silence is unwelcome, and to think I had wished for a life inwhich the only company I had was silence. Things always seem to have a way of backfiring, no? Maybe it is just me, but I do not like this room, or the stillness, nor the cold regrets. The chill of the wind doesn't affect me. This brings me surprise, I know what I am, oh how I wish I wasn't though! I hate this room, and what I have done. I long for noise from another human, even an argument from a drunkard seems fitting now. But alas, I know as much as you that it is not not allowed. So I must sit here, in this god forsaken room, and think. My anger has gone, and is replaced by sorrow, and is accompanied by the cold from the snow above me. How I detest being dead.


Submitted: December 08, 2008

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Shawn Michel de Montaigne

The zinger comes at the end!

A nice start. It would be interesting to see how this tricks out.

I look forward to reading more soon!

Mon, December 8th, 2008 6:31am

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Zinger? I haven't heard that word in w while, I like it. There probably will not be more of this, maybe, but there isn't much time to work on it.

Mon, December 8th, 2008 1:51pm

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