you said you could fix my heart

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

jk

You said we were ment to be together but truly your the one who broke my heart you told me i was your princess till you kissed that bleach blonde model then you have the balls to say you can fix my heart?


Submitted: April 10, 2012

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Halimeh

nice but shirt can you comment on my story

Tue, April 10th, 2012 1:59pm

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Thanks and sure

Tue, April 10th, 2012 7:11am

5Forever23His10Fan

This is a very good point that you brought up... but perhaps you could change the format a bit to make it a little more fluent... but it is very good

Sat, April 28th, 2012 10:42pm

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thaank you

Sat, April 28th, 2012 4:12pm

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