The Find

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Young Adult Readers And Writers
A short story containing dialog only about 2 friends who make a dangerous discovery.
I wrote this for a contest that only allowed dialog - it was a challenging way to write.
Hope you enjoy!

Submitted: December 20, 2015

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The Find

“Dude look what I found.”

“Is that for real man?”

“As real as a heart attack mutha fucka!”

“Hey man, don’t point that thing at me like that.”

“Relax dude, I’m pretty sure it’s on lock or something.”

“Pass, I always wanted to hold a real one. Holy shit! It’s fucking heavy.”

“That’s because it’s the real deal baby! Locked and loaded!”

“Where’d you find it?”

“Back of my dad’s closet.”

“Are you fucking crazy man? You know what he’ll do to you if he ever finds out?”

“He’s not going to find out.”

“You better hope he doesn’t.”

“Give, you wanna go shoot something?”

“Shoot something like what? And do you even know how to shoot that thing?”

“Course, I’ve watched my dad at the shooting range a couple of times. You just point and click.”

“I told you to stop pointing that thing at me man.”

“Will you relax dude. C’mon let’s go shoot a cat or something.”

“I’m not going to shoot a fucking cat, besides don’t you think someone’s gonna hear it?”

“We’ll go down by the river, we can shoot at ducks like in duck arcade, ping ping ping.”

“Quit waving that thing around before you shoot something for real man, then we’ll both be in

deep shit.”

“Let’s get the fuck out of here. My dad’s not back til five so we got the whole

afternoon.”

“I don’t know man, I say we just put it back.”

“Are you fucking nuts dude? There’s no way I’m putting this back until I get at least one shot

out of it first.”

“You’re fucking crazy man.”

“That’s right, I’m a crazy mutha fucka and if you don’t do what I say I’m gonna blow your

fucking head off!”

“Stop messin’ around man, it makes me nervous when you point that thing at me.

“I told you don’t worry dude-- oh shit! oh shit! oh shit! Dude are you alright? Dude. Answer me.

“Dude!”

“Answer me!”


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