Dark Angel's Whisper

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I love all types of angels, Read and find out what kind of angel this poem is about..

Submitted: February 23, 2009

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Dark Angel's Whisper

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Her wings were smokey black

A tear from her eye made her face crack

A smile spread her rosey red lips apart

In her eyes was an end and a start

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With eyes as black as coal

So dark they peer into my very soul

A shiver runs down my spine

A tear down my cheek at the same time

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A voice rises out of the back of my mind

A voice so sweet and shallow it for sure was not mine

It was the dark angel's whisper

That would compel me to miss her

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She was as beautiful as a dove

It was the beauty I just had to have

She began to rise into the sky

I fell to my knees as I began to cry

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I beged her not to leave me

I needed her to set me free

I realised she had come to take a life

So I ended it with the sharp blade of a kitchen knife

Written by Hope Sanders


NOTE: I have made a slight change to this poem, something needed removing , not that it was wrong I just think (and a few readers) without the last two lines it has become a stronger poem, It was solely my decission to remove it. certain comments mearly suggested it would be be stronger without the last two lines, but over review I decided that leaving it out was a good idea. Peace Out (Hope Sanders).

PS. For those who would like to know what was removed feel free to read the original poem which is located on my profile page. :)


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