Don't give in to that ?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A short poem about why you should choose life .

Regrets turn into pain , & 

that's when the Demond decide to attack 

they prefer a person who's weak to their self esteem 

it makes their job a lot easier 

stand strong 

stand your ground 

easier said than done I know , but 

don't allow those demons to take your soul 

that later on you'll hold regrets , but 

they'll be no one to listen 

you become just another lost souls 

that neither lives nor dies , & 

the only things that can push those demons away , is 

if you turn to god .

choose to say hi in life I than to say bye 

 


Submitted: February 18, 2014

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thumblina

i loved this poem...very well drafted
i loked the last line
choose to say hi in life I than to say bye

Tue, February 18th, 2014 3:10pm

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Ina mcfarmers

Thank you once again thumbalina for your read and comment .
Much appreciated :)))))))))))))) .

Tue, February 18th, 2014 3:23pm

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Ina mcfarmers

Thank you once again thumbalina for your read and comment .
Much appreciated :)))))))))))))) .

Tue, February 18th, 2014 3:24pm

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I wasn't sure if you got my first reply or not , so that's why I'm checking just to make sure that you did .

Tue, February 18th, 2014 7:29am

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Ina mcfarmers

Omg ! I think I over done something here , lol .

Tue, February 18th, 2014 3:32pm

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ashi17

Wow! Very well crafted and inspiring work... loved it!
please don't write and as &...
Keep your pen moving dear :)

Sun, February 23rd, 2014 12:40pm

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Thank you so much again for your second read , I know how and & shouldn't be in poetry yet I keep doing it , can you describe to me how I can break this habit , but Thant you very much for bringing it to ny attention and I will be more weary the next time , your comment certainly gave me the wow factor
Thank you so so much for this amazing complement in my writing - love you to bite ina .

Sun, February 23rd, 2014 10:00am

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