When the light goes out

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

How to come out and face the light

The lights have gone out in my world 

all I wanted to remember is now lost in the dark 

iv watched the past unravel 

was lost in all I must now forget 

dreams are so many wasted trolls 

that always come to a end 

I want this boat out in sea 

to top the waves and sail me away 

until my story survives the day 

no black night gonna block my day 

I'm now in the sunshine 

sailing freely through stormy grey .


Submitted: March 02, 2014

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Poopisgood

Great poem. Awesome job :)

Sun, March 2nd, 2014 1:39am

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Thank you so very much , if there's anything of yours you'd like me to read just let me know or I'll just hijack your page and choose one my self ,lol.
So long as it's not a novel , sory if that is the case .

Sat, March 1st, 2014 5:50pm

Lisa Ayers

I absolutely love this Ina, to be so lost and then found. Brillant work. Keep this up.

Sun, March 2nd, 2014 6:33am

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Thank you so very much Lisa , I'm trilled that you like this particular poem I'm trying my best to write poetry instead of writing or trying to write rhyming stories I want to try and keep away from that form so I hope I can only get beter :)

Sat, March 1st, 2014 11:47pm

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