L.O.V.E.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just a cheesy love poem for the love of my life

 

When my eyes first laid sight on you,

my days were no longer blue.

 

I knew that you were the one,

to bring me love like the day brought the sun.

 

From the day that we met i knew i had fallen in love,

were like the happiest couple like a pair of doves.

 

Being with you makes me so happy,

i know we'll be together even when our kids, kids, call us grammy and pappy.

 

I know no matter what nothing will break us,

even though we may have our fights and fuss.

 

You're the best baby don't ever fade away,

just stand here by my side and stay.

 

For I always be yours and you will always be mine,

i know that everything will be just fine.

 

I will love you no matter what,

even when were in the biggest rutt.

 

From day one i had no clue,

that i would fall madly in love with you.


Submitted: October 17, 2012

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tattooedmoon

Hi InfiniteFatal, you're right when you said it's cheesy but I guess when people fall in love they tend to be cheesy. Anyhow, lines 6 is good but the use of the word like is a bit redundant, you should rephrase it to 'we're the happiest couple like a pair of dove' . The rhyming scheme is good.
Keep writing and keep me updated if you post a new one.

Kisses,
T

Wed, October 17th, 2012 5:17am

foreverchanged

i can so relate to this

Tue, October 23rd, 2012 1:29am

MysticalUnicorn

this is adorable :)

Tue, November 13th, 2012 3:13pm

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