Poem by: Insane Membrane
Submitted: October 12, 2012
Ripped and shredded heart
Little Gem I love
Iceberg I love
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very clever. More please
:-) I am pleased you got it ...
I,ve only just got the title!
yes .... its the only thing that makes it a little funny
Gotta love that vegetable humor!
hmm ya do
Solumn salad, is that a greeting or an opinion I have about this poem, whatever it is my comment us radiccio
clever poem, funny and smart
like little sharp stabs with an icepick...loved it...clever title too
yes the title made it
I have to agree...Clever title and poem to match..I need to start eating more greenery to improve my love life :-)
well I hope it works for you
Loved this :)
Very clever ... it works on every level.
More please :)
ok celery valentine coming up .
I am never disappointed with your writing. I always leave with a smile.
good is every thing ok ?
Great work! Now to Love as if you have never been hurt! :)
worth a smile this poem, you know. and a like.
meh its was just the title that made me smille thanks
That's right! Let us love and not envy. Just saying;-)
envy why ?
DUH on me, I was thinking Titanic, you know Heart of the ocean, the GEM from the movie about the ICEBERG. The title went right by me... OH well, I got it now!
It was clever.
yeah kinda ... just playing around but my funny has disappeared :-(
Your funny never goes away. I love your insane sense of humour and your flippent but clever use of a veg. Now onto carrots!
haha Mr Dawn
I know I just keep it hidden in my basal anterior under very safe guard ...
when are you coming to Brisbane ?
Lettuce more if you get my meaning.
my salad days are over :-(
A very clever poem, works well, I enjoyed reading it.
meh I was running out of funny about the time I wrote this ... thanks anyway
Witty and pithy,perfect.
Sometimes they tear you apart a leaf at a time, then throw out the heart. Chopped, shredded, and exposed. But even if your crying on the inside, keep smiling. Like life itself, so many layers to this poem. Or maybe it's just me. I'll have to chew on it some more. Of course I liked it.
yeah ... there is thanks
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