Poem by: Insane Membrane
Submitted: March 29, 2012
Love on the rocks
aint no surprise
it was the sharp oyster shells
that became my demise
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A funny short poem begining with a little bit of Neil Diamond.....
absolutely who wouldn't want to start there
Excellent; and I agree with Brian W. Who wouldn't start with ND?
thanks again ... dejavu ? ps I heard him singing it in my car this morning and couldn't help but smile about how painful love on the rocks could be ...I wonder if Neils mind thought that way ...
Well guess not ... or his song would have been different
:) This is what good poetry is, few line and message delivered.
Only you would go there. LMAO. Will never hear that song the same again. :) Sherry
sorry ... but its such a beautiful song .. it just needed cheering up a but
Wonderfully delivered short and sweet. Love on the rocks LOL!!!
thanks ..... :-)
Look on the bright side
Saved you from a life of misery
Clever little rhyme.
Hahaha good poem :)
u should read some of mine, ur pick :)
ok I certainly shall
I like this one. Though what is "demise"?
it means the end termination downfall ... ie the sharp oyster shells put an end to my love on the rocks :-)
Yes how sad when love gets to that demise stage :-(
Damn those oysters shells!! I like this one alot sad yet with a funny twist making it go down like a good sundowner.
I love the song , but I am not much of a romantic , so I made up my own line I shall try to persuade Neil to sing it one day
Look at all the freakin' cuts and scrapes I have now. Now I have to go and throw a freakin' tantrum...Damn! I am out of band aids as well. Insane...You are just pure fun. If you ever go nice...I would think you were an imposter. I never thought about Love on the Rocks like this even when my mom used to play ND...And then along comes Insane...
Lol. When ur mom used to play it ... Ouch
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