Submitted: October 28, 2009
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to lie on the floor without holding on
How can you look at this and call it terrible? Never-ending self-esteem issues obviously get in the way of you seeing what an incredible writer you are. This, this is true poetry.
Fri, October 30th, 2009 4:51am
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you have no idea. my never-ending self-esteem issues kill me at least three times daily. but, yeah, sometimes, i can't help but look at it and call it terrible. there are times, though, when i read it and think it's one of the best poems i've ever written. it depends on my mood, really. but thanks! i'm really really glad you like it! =)
Fri, October 30th, 2009 12:13pmWow. That was a really amazing poem. Im at a loss for words. It was not at all terrible. It was really great. I don't know how to describe it(in a good way). This is one of your best poems. You really know how to make an impact on the reader. Wow. Thats all I have to say. Just Wow.
Tue, November 3rd, 2009 6:34pmI really like this one and the picture fits perfectly you write amazing !
& i know how you feel when you think your work isnt good and then you show someone else and it's abouloutly amazing to them .
Wow, that was great. It reminded me of your other poem, 'painting the seconds'. Pretty deep.
Sat, January 2nd, 2010 7:59pm"And time is
Everlasting."
This bit reminds me of our own futility and mortality. I like the idea behind the poem.
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Wed, October 28th, 2009 8:26pmi loveee this poem, its so beatiful, and true, and amazing and BRILLIANT, and genius, and perfect, and gosh every positive thing in the world....
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ok...thanks! =D
Wed, October 28th, 2009 1:33pm