I'm Letting Go Of You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

If you love something, set it free... If it comes back, it's yours... If it doesn't, it never was...

I'm Letting Go Of You.

It's dark and bleak

Wandering if you'll be mine to keep

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Drip drop goes the rain

And my silent tears laced with pain

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Come back and make me whole

Or I'll live eternity with no soul

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So sudden did you turn away

Left saying that I would be okay

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But you obviously didn't know

That I'd be on an all time low

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Memories are all that I have

Of better days when I could easily laugh

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Now all I do is cry

I've found no good in goodbye

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I let you go thinking it was because I loved you

Believing you'd be there to help me breakthrough

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But how are we meant to be?

When you never did come back for me

*

So baby I hope you see

That I'll never be yours to keep


Submitted: March 24, 2012

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Charles Mausolf

You threw me there at the end. I liked it. You were the one who was not kept. Very nice.

Tue, April 17th, 2012 6:12am

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Thank you

Sat, May 5th, 2012 8:07am

siirdarkmaz

Wow! That was ur best so far. I loved it.

Sun, July 29th, 2012 11:44pm

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Thanks alot! =)

Wed, August 1st, 2012 2:41pm

FixMyHeart

you're a good writer

Sun, August 26th, 2012 3:56pm

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Thank you =)

Sun, August 26th, 2012 9:05am

ZAC XD

One of the trickiest things to rhyming poety, is to make it flow, unforced, let the story go on, still telling your thoughts. You did this perfectly! Wondeful! ? I love this one! Thanks for the fan, btw.

Sun, October 7th, 2012 3:12pm

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Thank you so much for the positive feedback! xD It means alot to me, and you're most welcome :)

Sun, October 7th, 2012 10:18am

NoraAbz

Cool poem a definitely liked one too! keep up with writing poems because your talented ^.^ yep.

Wed, March 13th, 2013 6:34pm

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Thank you very much =)

Tue, April 16th, 2013 10:03am

kleray93

This is rely good & well writtin.. You got talent, keep it up

Tue, April 16th, 2013 8:53pm

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Thank you =)

Mon, April 22nd, 2013 7:54am

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