Chasing the Darkness

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

What can chaise the darkness away?

an entry for Dibble dabble!

Darkness consumes all of me,

a mask held high to fool thee.

But at dawn it is torn apart,

spider like hands breaking from my heart.

A glowing bulb that is the sun,

climbs higher still as I run.

Tearing through paddocks dusted with snow,

It is through the sheep that I slow.

The sun climbs above the trees,

chasing the darkness and the freeze.

In awe I stand arms wide open,

thinking of how I'm going to put this in a poem.


Submitted: April 20, 2012

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dibbledabble

Irish!

Love this, wonderful imagery, emmotional, delighful!

going to post your link on my page and see if I can't get you some more reads, you deserve it

Dibs

Sat, April 21st, 2012 7:26am

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THANK YOU!!! :DDDDDDD

Sat, April 21st, 2012 7:51pm

jmurch

You would not believe how many times I have noticed sunlight or moonlight with the contrast of shadow...It is some of the most incredible sight to my eyes. You paint a wonderous environment with your words, and I am enjoying the peek into your world. You seem to find a world beyond the canvas of mine. Thank you for the stunning visuals of your poetry!

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 1:19am

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:D Thank you! You are an inspiration to me!

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 4:32pm

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