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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
Animated cartoon poetry about earth (planet pong) suit all ages,with characters galore Hoorah! For children but also for adults and everyone else!! This is for the eco warrier,the school teacher, mums and dads, polititions everyone!!!!!!!!! who loves this planet.
Planet pong is a fun way to communicate pollution and doing our bit with a gentle warning. The planets are characteurs and Im hoping to make this a childrens e book as I have the artwork too. I hope you like it.
Isabel Monday(c)2013

Submitted: June 03, 2013

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Submitted: June 03, 2013



Planet Pong!


Planet pong

Earth's gone wrong!

Saturn sings

'Earth was the king

But now the planet has had it'

Planet pong

Something’s wrong

Earth can’t breath

Sniff sneeze

Mars interrupts

He can be abrupt

‘Sort it out

In case it spreads

To Us!’

Pluto dosen’t care

Too far from there

But Jupiter’s quite near

And fears

Venus purrs…

‘What did you do?’

‘Not a lot!

It wasn’t me!

The people on board just abandoned me!’

‘That’s a shame’, said Venus again

‘Around here you were the best planet

I don’t have it right you see

I don’t have people on me

Planet Pong (you) can’t go on!’

Uranus is bored

Always ignored

But can’t stand the pong

‘Go somewhere else I’ve had enough

Go, leave or get the people off’

Mars zips by

‘Earth please don’t cry’

We’ll help you get the people, off your planet

They’re not your friends

They’ve caused you pain

We’ll all have a chat and plan it’

Seven sisters all agree, ‘let us help,we’ll help thee,

'cos your sneezes are blowing us against the other planets’

‘I know sniffs Earth into his handkerchief

I don’t mean to er…AIT TIS’HOOOOOOO!

I don’t wish to be plant pong

I don’t want to be earth gone wrong

Sniff, It wasn’t meant to be like this you see

In the beginning God made me

He made me well with green land and sun

But now I’m rotten and the problem begun

With the man he put on

He lost his love and care for me

He thought of himself and what he could be

So now I’m ill with what they’ve done

I’m so ill I can’t go on

I need some help I’ll ask the sun’

But God came by on his morning run

‘Earth don’t worry

A new earth you will become

For it’s written in my word you see

I’ll make a new earth for my special people and me

And well all live together all as was meant to be.


© isabelmonday2013




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