Writers are We

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Eleven lines of metaphor.

We are the dust collectors,
The street sweepers,
Gathering scraps of earth
And heaping them into mountains,
Collecting the world's refuse
And from it crafting cities.
We work at night
By candlelight
To fashion our meaningful somethings.
Most of the time we fail, but
We do not stop trying.


Submitted: January 28, 2013

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E. J. Rylee

THIS IS MY NEW MOTTO OF LIFE

This is absolutely brilliant. It's almost more a statement than a poem--if someone said this to me (angrily, of course) then I would have good cause to be very, very afraid. Excellent work yet again!:D

Mon, January 28th, 2013 11:47pm

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Hahaha mine too :) I'm not quite sold on the title, do you have any suggestions?

Mon, January 28th, 2013 4:10pm

bobthebuilder

This is clever and interesting, with some really good imagery. I think this is really very good.

Wed, February 27th, 2013 2:07am

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Thanks :)

Tue, February 26th, 2013 8:25pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

Anything's possible,

if we are able to make it happen.

It's when we do nothing,

that we can be assured that things will happen,

as they are meant to,

without intervention.

It is only when we intervene and change things,

so that they happen in a different way,

that we can be assured that we made it possible.

Always follow your dreams and not your nightmares,

for you may have little dreamers that are following you,

and they have no need of nightmares,

only knights in shining armor.

Stormbird Throneshaker

A great big...normal sized vote/like from me.
Too bad they don't have the star system, you'd get ten from me for this one!

Fri, March 1st, 2013 12:58pm

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I started a response, but your comment on following dreams suddenly made me think of a poem, so I went and wrote that instead. But thank you for the comment :) it's interesting that you dialogue with the poem, rather than just saying stuff about the poem. It's fun to read :)

Fri, March 1st, 2013 5:51pm

brucek

ah, that damn creative process! quite a few of my pieces were when i had nothing to write about, so i wrote about that! and what do you know, i had something to say after all. i like your attitude young missie!

Mon, April 22nd, 2013 5:01pm

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Why thank you :) can you hear the Hollow Men influence in it (esp in the opening lines)? :P I love that poem

Mon, April 22nd, 2013 12:32pm

TheTeddybearNinja

The title is what caught me! I swear I was about to look at what novels you had and I was stopped immediately when I saw the title, lol! This is a really cool way to describe writers. This made me feel even better about being a writer! :D TEAM WRITERS, LET'S GO! YEAH! Kudos milady!

Thu, April 25th, 2013 11:14pm

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Aww thanks :) I was trying to imitate a T. S. Eliot poem and this is what I wound up with :P glad you liked it!

Thu, April 25th, 2013 4:22pm

DreamWeaver444

I love this. great writing and motto. keep it up

Thu, June 20th, 2013 12:17pm

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Thanks :D this is probably one of my favorite poems that I've written

Thu, June 20th, 2013 11:39am

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