Dramatic Watching

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

never let her suffering...

I was depleted when 
I saw her crying 
and moaning 
her eyes were full 
of tears 
what made wonder in 
that moment is when 
she rose up her eyes 
to me 
and started smiling at me 
with shedding these tears 
I desired to watch her for 
along time 
and ask her what went 
wrong with her 
I didn't want that pain 
she was feeling inside 
just letting her untill she 
is cured 
it was really a dramatic watching 
and I coudn't bear with it 
but I could deal with it 
so shall I let her go? 
or deny that touched sight? 
of course no! 
just standing up by her 
till she finds her lost 

Submitted: November 20, 2014

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Lane Davis

A little editing is in order but the story is relatable as both the watched and the watcher. :)

Thu, November 20th, 2014 10:02pm


ops absolutely you're right
Thank you for your shine comment :)

Fri, November 21st, 2014 1:38am

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