Redundant Ideacroty

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wrote this one to test out a few new styles, I really liked how it turned out. Ideacroty is a word I created the definition can be foun on one of my other poems, I dont remember which one. Please comment.

Cut loose these ties
And free you mind
Into a pool of death we dive
Too late to stop
Too hard to try
Too bad this time we had to die
I tried to ease
This endless pain
I tried to breath fresh air again
I tried to see
Past death and love
But couldn’t help but look above

Cup our death
Enter step
Bleed the pain
And rise again
Only to fall
And fall so far
Only to bleed
Again and need
To heal the wounds
Within the womb
Of life we crie
And wish to die
And lie
And scream
And dream
And bleed
And need
And see
And free
Ourselves
We delve
Into the pool
Of water cool
So cool
We fools
Don’t know
And go
So blindly forth
To escort
Our own death
Beget our breath

And back again to the abyss
We fall
And crawl
And scream
And wish
And then we forget to breath
We see
And flee
And crie
And leave
And we have only ourselves to blame
We die
And lie
And play
This game

And we cut loose these ties
And cup our death
Or breath beget
And fall for lies
And this time
Our only crime
Is a repetition
Of ideacroty
And atrocity
So bleed
And die
And don’t dare crie
Into a pool of death we dive
Too late to stop
Too late to try
No time to fend
This is…
THE END


Submitted: December 27, 2007

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