This is another poem that I wrote to expres my love for my one and only. I mean for it to show her I have not and will not forget how she and I pictured our future on a fine summer day.

Hey, Guess What.

" Hey, guess what?", she says.

Hmm. Let me guess. You have stumbled upon a thought. You are thinking of

a white and red house which just kisses the banks of a lake, which seems to shine

as if stars rest on its many valiant waves.You look around.There is a dock with a boat tied to it,

and as you continue to pace your head from one side to the other,

it appears as if thereis no one else about for miles.

You feel the silence, and you absorb it as you look toward the driveway.

Upon the enterance of the driveway, there is a massive tree, with leaves green, and from

one of it's many branches, hangs a tire swing. You think back to the time you asked your love

if you could one day have one. And he shook his head and said, " If it makes you happy."

Then, as you are caught in the moment, you hear a door creek open from the balcony upon

which you stand. You turn to see the one who promised you the tire swing, who promised

you the balcony, who promised you the house and the lake, who promised you the very moment

you share as he holds you in his arms and tells you he loves you. You know he means it with all of his heart

just byfeeling the many beats from his chest as hepulls you close to him.

And in his arms, you feel his love, and you feel safe and warm, for there is a cold breeze in the air.

You are thinking of our future as it will be.

So full of love and passion. This is what I know you are thinking of. I then turn to the one who asked

and I say, " I have an idea."

She then says " I'll tell you anyway! Ilove you!"

I smile at her and reply, " That's exactly whatI was thinking."

To my one and only, whom I will love forever,


These are the moments in which our hearts beat as one.


Submitted: October 10, 2008

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ugh this is amazing . everytime i read it i get chills .

Fri, October 10th, 2008 3:56am


You and me both. I always read what I write. Especially when I cannot see her.

Thu, October 9th, 2008 8:58pm


This, in my humnle opinion, is the best lolve poem if yours that I have seen. But, then, I am a sucker for a powerful finish.


Fri, October 10th, 2008 4:55am


Hahahahaha. Thank you very much for your honesty, and aren't we all suckers for powerful finishes. I'm glad you enjoy my stuff. I'll keep writing forever.


Thu, October 9th, 2008 9:58pm


this is a good piece, i would read it again and again... and again.very good

Fri, October 10th, 2008 9:52am


Thank you. Feel free to read it as much as you want.

Sat, October 11th, 2008 9:18am

angie sass

wow, very descriptive. i love it!

Mon, October 20th, 2008 11:32pm


Thank you, I do appreciate it. Feel free to look at my other works too.

Tue, October 21st, 2008 12:22pm

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