Poem by: J Christopher Bartley
Submitted: October 21, 2012
Faces in the dark.
Gap toothed smile
Of Jack O' Lanterns.
Daring me to close
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Critique: Oh Schizophrenia. Its so vibrantly hellish, wouldn't you think so? To see only what your eyes are meant to behold. For no one else to understand. Only to torment you without relief. I find any poem or story written upon the condition to be well described, and even simply you have found to capture its acquired beauty.
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Thanks. I have done several on this subject. And thank you for taking the time to read and respond.
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