Poem by: J Christopher Bartley
issues, americans, weight, obese
Submitted: December 07, 2012
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I have lost track of how often I hear about obesity in America. Good poem.
Thanks again. :)
Iskah E Shirah
Nice :P I almost wish you'd expounded upon it, teased out some sort of narrative, but it seems you were going for a word-painting (basically; idk how else to describe it haha) rather than a story, and I think it works :)
Thanks haha. Short and sweet :)
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