My Voice Set Free

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

For those that find it difficult to make themselves heard: we have another voice and through it, our mind lets us sing.

My voice:

Meek and feeble,

It's locked up without choice.

Over there, Paranoia reigns king.

Face to Face,

My forlorn voice,

Fails to keep up the pace.

Over there, frustration is mounting.

But with pen and paper,

Dwelling alone,

 My voice rings loud and clear.

Here, perhaps I too can be a king.

Months. Years.

Many have passed,

But only now revelation appears:

Here, my voice is not afraid to sing.


Submitted: January 15, 2014

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Anonymouss

Ah, I really like this. It's brilliant.

Wed, January 15th, 2014 6:08am

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Thanks for taking the time to read it!

Wed, January 15th, 2014 6:51am

Mister Gone

Very well said, and I do understand. Keep writing! And thank you for the kind comment on my story.

Fri, January 17th, 2014 2:10am

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Thank you for the compliment, and your welcome as well!

Fri, January 17th, 2014 5:31pm

Mike Stevens

Excellent poem!

Sat, January 18th, 2014 5:59pm

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Thanks! :D

Sat, January 18th, 2014 10:09am

AllyNumber01

hmn.. i think your a very good poet =)
you should try posting some of your poems on, WATTPAD.com its a better writing site. please try it.
anyways, i like your poem, keep writing (^o^) !! morePOWER !!

Sat, January 25th, 2014 2:26am

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Thank you for your kind comment, and I'll be sure to check it out!

Sat, January 25th, 2014 12:12am

Mr Watson

A well written poem, your right pen and paper you can express your feelings without fear, great piece.

Fri, February 28th, 2014 10:46pm

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Exactly what I was thinking when I wrote this, thanks for reading!

Fri, February 28th, 2014 3:57pm

BUnique

A brilliant poem, it flowed well, I enjoyed it!

Sun, March 9th, 2014 1:39pm

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Thanks so much!

Mon, March 10th, 2014 8:33am

angellynn

There's a certain power in the way you pen your words. Very creative and with sound meaning. I agree with many of your readers, you should do something with your work. I'd buy it.

Angellynn

Sat, March 22nd, 2014 12:49pm

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Wow, thank you so much for your kind words, this truly means a lot to me.

Tue, April 8th, 2014 5:41pm

sassy33

Wow awesome poem :)
So short but there is so much power and emotion in it!!
Well done and you are very talented ;)

Thu, April 17th, 2014 9:31pm

Author
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Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thu, April 17th, 2014 2:33pm

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