Let it be, all but a dream

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

call it what you wish, but haven't the siltest idea, but to call iit ,life.

See what you've done, how you've ripped at my sole, what you have done to me, what you are still doing to me, well you go ahead, you spew your words of hate. Pulling at every thing I ever called home. Look at my heart, look around, ash, and dust is what you left of me. so here I am on the floor , with unspeakable pain that seamed to linger, forever. see what you've done, what your still doing , what you must do, because it is your nature, just like it is my nature to be forgivng. To forgive you.\"\"


Submitted: January 09, 2012

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I Am Emo And I Love It

this is good man, nice pic.

Tue, January 10th, 2012 1:45am

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Thanks, if you do not mind, could you become a fan, or perhaps read my serise, blood stains the snow, thak you.

Mon, January 9th, 2012 6:01pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

Tell ya what I'm gonna do . . . now where was I? Whats those dots doing following me? Oh yah, spelled yeh, spelled . . . oh to heck with it, there's those dots again! Any who, or how, you write from your heart as if you've lived it, and if you've lived it, you sure do write from the heart about it, mistakes and all, but that's all apart of writing. We don't always cross our T's, t's, just in case they are little T's, or t's, and we don't always dot our eyes, I mean I's, i's. Yeah the keyboard does that now, doesn't it? We'll run a wordtogether, get away from me, you're to close, word together or say james, drive me home, instead of James drive me home, but James doesn't care, he is going to drive you home if he's your shofer, chaffer, one of those guys that drives you home in a limo!
Anyway, I liked your poem. Your, you're, this is another word that I'll mess up on. Wrote one great big novel and every single, unmarried I was a little baby i, and I, the grown up I, had to go back and correct every one . . . is every one one word or too, to, I mean two, darn it, and there's those three sneaky dots again. And these little things , , , put them here, or don't put them . . . see the one in the word don't? It's the one that can fly I guess.
Geesh, probably spelled it wrong to, but gosh, if we thought about all the mistakes that we would make trying to write a poem/story . . . do they lean / or are they suppose to lean \? Oh yes, we would give up and quit! Darn dots and dashes and what I meant to say when I said, Tell ya what I'm gonna do . . . is become a fan ta, te, ti, to, tu, too!
Am I crazy or . . .

Mon, January 23rd, 2012 6:30pm

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thanks , cool so you figure out what is wrong with your computer yet

Mon, January 23rd, 2012 4:08pm

Christian Taylor

Poetry comes from the heart and soul of the writer...this poem captures that to the fullest! Excellent work!

Sun, March 25th, 2012 5:20pm

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Thank you,

Sun, March 25th, 2012 10:27am

Soul_Dreamer

that was heartbreaking but a very good poem, I enjoy reading your writing! :)

Mon, July 16th, 2012 10:17am

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thank you I am glad you liked it

Mon, July 16th, 2012 9:00am

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