Shhhs Listen

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

it was just

Shhh

listen to the sounds it's make

to it's beauty

let the sound consume your body

let it bleed into you,become you, let it in

let it in to the darkness of your hollow sole

give in to it's un-yeilding power

allow the tears to flood your eyes

feel what we have felt all these years

shhh

listen to the sound it makes

it's creaking in the night, it's pules beating away, beating away

listen to it's perfection

listen to how they complement us, each other

 listen to their romance, the essence

in the bitter silences of night

listen shh

listen , listen, listen

 


Submitted: March 31, 2012

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Blackmirror

I like this poem. It seems so powerful and thoughtful. Lovely. :)

Sat, March 31st, 2012 10:49pm

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thanks I wasn't really sure if anyone would like it but I think you and another person green glass, and some one els, they liked it so vary happy about that, and um thanks again

Sun, April 1st, 2012 4:42am

Christian Taylor

Very powerful and poignant! Good work!

Sun, April 1st, 2012 4:03am

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thank you

Sun, April 1st, 2012 4:34am

Megstar1563

This is really powerful, as everyone is saying lol, but it is. Its awesome, you write beautifully :)

Sat, April 14th, 2012 2:02pm

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thank you so much

Sat, April 14th, 2012 10:18am

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