a date

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
what will happen on her date?

Submitted: October 26, 2015

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I sat on my bed all done up for my date...I was scared. I felt like a brick, I felt like I was glued to my bed.

Knock! Knock! Knock! I jumped. He was here. I checked my make-up one last time before I went to the door.

He was stood there, the moon was in the backround. I smiled, he did not like to fuss. His blonde hair was ruffled up. 

As we got in his car I turned and looked out the window. When we got there I was not to suprised, Mc-donalds! I was 16, he was 16 aswell....We both have alot of things in common, one of them being Mc-donalds.

We found a table, I sat waiting for him to come back. Just then I saw him...I froze. His hand was around another womans waist!

I waited for him to come back to our table before I asked him: "Who was she?" I did not jump to conclusions, I asked him the question calmly.

"Don't worry baby girl its fine,"  he said smoothly. 

"Wait...I know her...She is your flippin' ex-girlfriend...oohh whats her name...Shantel, thats it!"

I got up and marched out. My phone rang, Luke? Luke was a cute nerd I have known a long time.

"Hi L-Luke..." My words turned to tears.

"Cindy I am on my way to pick you up, where are you!"

Luke got out of his car and hugged me."Whats wrong?" He asked 

"M-Marcus!" I was in his warm arms crying still.

He marched in. "Oi you....Yeah you Marcus...Look at her...You destroyed your girl..you are a sick person!"

Everyone gasped at Marcus. Luke took me outside and said "I know your shaken up but remember you MY girl!" I looked at him...He pulled me close and kissed me.


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