When You're Gone: Day 1

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

The first day of when he was gone

My heart aces for him to come back even though he has only just left.  Five days isn't a long time people said to me, 5 days is a life time without him . Even though I may not see him everyday I at least see him once out of they five days.  He's in Valencia, sunny Spain lucky boy.  I can't even text him to see if he is safe and having a good time that's the worst bit no contact it's like he's on an alien planet far away from here but he is only 2 or 3 hours on a plane not even half way across the world.  This is only day one another four to go.  I woke up this morning with a sound that I am very used to.. my phone.  I jumped out of my bed to see if it was him.  To my delight it was, just saying that he was boarding and that he was going to phone me as soon as he got of the plane home.  A tear streamed down my face knowing that this was the last text I could send to him in a while I had to make it good.  I said that I loved him forever and always and I will see him for sure on Saturday and when I say it like that it doesn't sound like a long time but trust me it is.  Last night I spent it with him.  Lying on his soft chest looking up at his ceiling.  Our favourite song came on he moved me off his chest and stood up he took my by the hand and kissed it I stood up next to him, he took me by the waist and started dancing with me.  I look deeply into his eyes he knew something wasn't right.  A tear ran down my face he wiped it and ask what the matter was.  I never told him I just silently look at my feet he put in soft finger under my chin and pushed my head up softly I couldn't resist I had to tell him he looked worried.  I told him that I was going to miss him to my surprise he understood.  I sat down wiping my tear from my face he picked up my hand and slipped a beaded string bracelet on my wrist "For you, so I'm always with you" he whispered in my ear.  I stood up and gave him a long tight hug as more tears ran down my face like a river making their way down my cheeks and on to his t-shirt.  He picked up my heart necklace he gave me for my Christmas "Think of that as my heart it's sits perfectly on you chest close to your heart so you can feel my love".  He was right I smiled and couldn't help myself from giving him a kiss on his rosy lips.  I had to go, we gave each other our last goodbye hugs and kisses and I left I felt as though someone took a knife to my heart a pierced it.  I need him.


Submitted: April 09, 2012

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stuckinthemoment

This was really cute, i like it:D
Only thing I would recommend that I made the mistake of not doing too is splitting up your paragraphs, it makes it so much easier to read!
But I think to story line is great, can't wait to read more of your work!
xoxo

Tue, April 10th, 2012 9:10pm

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Thank you so much! Also thank you for the help I will try that next time! X'o

Tue, April 10th, 2012 11:59pm

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