my gf suggested i post this so please read and comment your opinion

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
Really just want to see if im as good as my gf thinks. She just read this and asked me why I wasn't writing a book

Submitted: April 11, 2016

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The moon shines brightly off the water on this night. The air is almost perfect. Dry, warm, and a little breeze floating throughout the sand. The moon reflects on the water and makes her eyes sparkle so innocently. We walked for hours on the beach that night, not knowing what was in store for us in the future. A part of me always knew she was the one. A part of me was so scared that she didn't think I was the one for her. We grew up with very different lives. I was a lawyers son, she was just a farm girl from Alabama. She and I both had big dreams in our hearts. She had dreamed of performing in the music industry. Her goal was to be a world wide known singer. We both came to California to experience the fame and fortune, but what we got was not expected. 


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