it is just what i feel about this world

World is changing , with that am i really
It is something that I may not realize,
Why this world have been so hard enough for me to survive
Or it is just that I may not make myself to be alive,
Has not been the case that I am looking about me
Would it be; I just to need to change the world created for me,
Failure  and lie is something that has no existence into my life
Is it just because I am rational or helping me to be alive,
I think life has changed so much from the past that I passed
But it seems somewhere down the line I may be still in the past,
I need to shun it off and try to live in the present 
It is just the case I am more  eager to be part of the recent

Submitted: June 13, 2013

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this is a wonderful philosophy of the world. in one word i could say "world is a myth" interesting poem.

Mon, June 17th, 2013 7:24am


thanks :)

Mon, June 17th, 2013 2:37am


So introspective. While you can look to both the past and future, you can only live in the present.

Sun, October 6th, 2013 3:02pm


I like the message of this poem, along with the great rhyming! Good job! Thanks for sharing, Jalad:)

Sun, January 19th, 2014 6:30pm


Thanks JoelatRpg:)

Tue, January 21st, 2014 9:58am

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