Sleeping Beauty - My love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

One night my girlfriend came over and slept in my bed. I decided to comment on how she looked. Very brief.


There she was, lying on my bed like a princess from a fairy tale. As I watched her sleep, I couldn’t help but think of how gorgeous she looked at this very moment, her long and luscious hair flowing down the side of her long and slender body created an image of pure innocence and beauty. Tucked in the fetal position, her chin nestled against the top of her chest;  her arms crossed as if she was holding onto something tight not wanting to let it go. Knees bent at a forty-degree angle, she looked so innocent lying in my bed. Her breathing was soft and exaggerated, a deep breath followed by a slow exhale. A small smirk on her face indicated she was pleased with her sleeping arrangements.

Without disturbing her slumber, I decided to crawl into bed with her. I decided to leave the covers on her because I was warm enough. With my back towards her, I slowly laid down to rest. As I rested my head against the soft pillow, I felt her cold soft arms wrapping around my chest as if she had been expecting me. Soft and slowly, I turned around so I could face the only person that could truly make me happy, brushing away a strand of hair covering her face; I kissed her forehead ever so gently. Her smile grew even bigger and she pulled me closer; I held her tight and I slowly closed my eyes.


Submitted: January 15, 2012

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Yume chan

Awe! Its so sweet! The way u describe it really show a great pure love towards the girl. Lol me being hopelessly romantic this makes me smile. Really beautiful:)

Sun, January 15th, 2012 8:55pm


Thank you Yume :) She is truly wonderful

Sun, January 15th, 2012 3:03pm

Bethany falmer

Smiles, that is a truly beautiful sentiment.
Thank you for posting this lovely piece.

Sun, January 15th, 2012 9:17pm


Thank you for commenting on this Bethany :) I'm glad you liked it.

Thu, February 16th, 2012 1:19am

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