Ending My Pain

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

a story about I girl in pain
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I twisted the handle, turning on the shower. The soothingly warm water ran down my body and traced over the scars on my arms, the proof of the attempts to cut away the pain. Yet no pain left. Instead, I can't wear short sleeves even in the summer. I don't swim, and constantly fake being sick to skip P.E. Trying to cut away my pain, I had only caused myself more and cut away my life. So now, as the warm water soothed my scarred arms, I realized the pain would never be silenced, and these scars were proofed. As I turned off the shower, I realized I had unconsciously plugged the drain. The bathtub was almost full, with just enough space to fit a human body. I slowly lowered myself down, saying a final prayer before I completely submerged and handed myself over to the darkness.

Submitted: September 07, 2010

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Wed, September 8th, 2010 10:20am


Again, a most powerful piece of writting. How is it that you can write such beautiful stuff in such little amount of lines. If only ---

I love this piece, your an amazing writter.

Thu, September 30th, 2010 6:55pm


thanks so much (again)! I'm working on more :)

Sat, October 2nd, 2010 11:52pm

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