Changed by Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

A little something I wrote with someone in mind, enjoyy :)

Your smile becomes mine,

Our hearts became one.

My safest place,

is there in your arms.

I could go on and on,

The things about you I love.

A list of 100 is never enough.

I could honestly say your an answered prayer,

When your love and attention is something I bear

When things seem better,

and change is this good

You truly make me happier then anyone could.


Submitted: August 30, 2012

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WinterFairy

This is a very beautiful poem :) one thing that confused me, however, was that in the first half of the poem, i thought the poem was going to be free verse, but then you switched and started to have the words rhyme. This is fine, but to better it i suggest to pick either free verse or rhyming throughout the entire poem! :) keep writing poetry! Tell me when you post more :)

Thu, August 30th, 2012 2:10pm

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Thanks! :) I love you're input! :)

Fri, August 31st, 2012 10:21am

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