Your smile becomes mine,
Our hearts became one.
My safest place,
is there in your arms.
I could go on and on,
The things about you I love.
A list of 100 is never enough.
I could honestly say your an answered prayer,
When your love and attention is something I bear
When things seem better,
and change is this good
You truly make me happier then anyone could.
Submitted: August 30, 2012
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WinterFairy
This is a very beautiful poem :) one thing that confused me, however, was that in the first half of the poem, i thought the poem was going to be free verse, but then you switched and started to have the words rhyme. This is fine, but to better it i suggest to pick either free verse or rhyming throughout the entire poem! :) keep writing poetry! Tell me when you post more :)
Thu, August 30th, 2012 2:10pmAuthor
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Thanks! :) I love you're input! :)
Fri, August 31st, 2012 10:21am