far beyond broken

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: True Confessions  |  House: Booksie Classic

about getting bertayed by someone you thought you could trust.

Broken

Have you ever been hurt so bad that it was hard to forgive

and forget what they did to you.

Cry yourself to sleep every night thinking about what they put you through.

That it got sooooo bad that when you saw them you died alittle inside.

It was like they broke you.

And you think you can never be the same again,

i know how it feels to be broken so many time you forget that you even have

feelings or even care about others because nobody really cares about your feelings

all they really care about is how they look when they break you.


Submitted: May 23, 2012

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Ann Sepino

Oh my!

This is a very sad poem.

I like the way it's written, especially because the character of the protagonist is portrayed clearly using 'modern word' combination.

Thumbs up! (n_n)

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 4:41am

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well thanx i think im going to write more and some is going to be happier poems

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 6:31pm

Brian W

A sad poem...There are some out there that care...Well written

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 5:04am

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thanx i was in a bad mood and i feelt sad

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 6:25pm

Soul_Dreamer

a very sad poem, Ive felt like this recently :(
by the was nice work :)

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 5:06am

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thanx i wrote this in class and that what i was feeling

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 6:23pm

sweet agony xo

woww

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 5:07am

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yeee

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 6:20pm

AnOpenedSoul

Won't say that "time heals all wounds" because there are occasions when it doesn't. Sometimes we just have to put things "in a box" and close the lid and move on. Liked this.

Sat, July 28th, 2012 3:50am

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thanx but this is just an old writting that i did when i was mad and i have moved on

Sat, July 28th, 2012 4:23pm

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