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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

Submitted: May 19, 2017

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Submitted: May 19, 2017






Cosmology is Defines as a very deep thought of a Universe which everyone can’t understand easily it has variables it has definitions which can elaborate in different terms and different languages….

This is my elaboration my language which you have to understand while reading this story…

This is my own thoughts and own words which retain in cosmology





Here We Go…….???????


BakkaaaBooooooom BakkaaaaBoooooom


< DeepSpace>


Somewhere in Space after returning From A Mission…………….




Nearing the end of a long mission exploring deep space And Different Forms of the universe, the spacecraft SURYABHASKAR is returning to Earth. The crew consists of Captain Avindra Shukla, First Officer Lieutenant Shiraj Sharma, journalist Harry Kaur, ESP (Extrasensory Perception) sensitive scientist Dr. Hemant Bahadur, the expedition's civilian leader Dr. Anil Bhandari and the Humanoid Robot V.I.N.CENT ("Vital Information Necessary Centralized").

The SURYABHASKAR crew discovers a black hole in space With a Great Massive Enlarge Form of energy with a spaceship nearby, somehow defying the hole’s massive gravitational pull. The ship is identified as the long-lost Indian Spaceship CHANDRABHASKAR, the ship has very long story in the past and no one can found it for many years but at that moment through passing black holes he saw it Hemant's father served aboard when it went missing. Deciding to investigate, the SURYABHASKAR encounters a mysterious null gravity field force attracting and surrounding the CHANDRABHASKAR. The SURYABHASKAR becomes damaged when it drifts away from the CHANDRABHASKAR and into the black hole's intense gravity field, but the ship manages to move back to the CHANDRABHASKAR and finds itself able to dock to what initially appears to be an abandoned vessel.

The SURYABHASKAR crew cautiously boards the CHANDRABHASKAR and soon encounters the ship's commander, Dr. Jojo Ron, a brilliant scientist of ISRO. Aided by a crew of faceless, black-robed android drones and his sinister-looking robot RS47, Jojo explains that he has lived all alone on the CHANDRABHASKAR for years. After the ship encountered a meteor field and was disabled, he ordered the human crew to return to Earth, but Hemant's father chose to remain aboard and has since died. Jojo then reveals that he has spent the past 20 years studying the black hole and intends to fly the CHANDRABHASKAR through it. Only Anil believes it is possible and asks to accompany Jojo on the trip.

The rest of the SURYABHASKAR crew grows suspicious of the faceless drones' human-like behavior: Booth sees a robot limping and Avindra witnesses a robot funeral and discovers the CHANDRABHASKAR crew’s personal items in the ship's living quarters. Old B.O.B. (Bio-sanitation Battalion), a battered early Humanoid model robot similar to V.I.N.CENT, explains that the faceless drones are in fact the human crew, who mutinied when Jojo refused to return to Earth and had been lobotomized and "reprogrammed" by Jojo to serve him. Hemant's father had led the mutiny and was killed. Using telepathy, V.I.N.CENT tells Hemant the truth about what happened. When Hemant tells Anil, he removes the reflective faceplate from a "drone" to reveal the zombie-like face of a crew member. Appalled, Anil tries to flee the bridge with Hemant, but RS47 kills him he shoots anil with a bombarded canon pistol gun. Jojo kidnaps Hemant, ordering his sentry robots to take her to the ship's hospital bay to be lobotomized.

Just as the process begins, Avindra rescues Hemant, along with V.I.N.CENT and B.O.B. Meanwhile, fearing the situation is escalating dangerously, Booth attempts to escape alone in the SURYABHASKAR.  Jojo orders the craft shot down, but the weapons fire sends the ship crashing into the CHANDRABHASKAR, destroying its port-side anti-gravity force field generator. A meteor storm then destroys the starboard generator. Without its null-gravity bubble, the CHANDRABHASKAR starts to break apart under the black hole's huge gravitational forces.

Jojo and the SURYABHASKAR survivors separately plan their escape aboard a small probe ship used to study the black hole. Jojo orders RS47 to go and prepare the probe ship, but then a large view screen falls on Jojo, pinning him down. His lobotomized crew stands motionless as he struggles helplessly. RS47 confronts the others and fatally damages B.O.B. moments before he himself is damaged by V.I.N.CENT and drifts lifelessly out of the broken ship into the black hole. Avindra, Shiraj, Hemant and V.I.N.CENT reach the probe ship and launch, only to discover the controls locked onto a flight path that takes them into the black hole.




Here Comes The Black Hole…..











(Inside The Black Hole Tunnel) Here We Go


In a surreal sequence inside the black hole which resembles Heaven and Hell, an aged Jojo becomes merged with RS47 in a burning Hell That’s Called Go To Hell, hellish landscape populated by dark robed specters resembling the CHANDRABHASKAR  drones.


(Inside A Worm Hole)


Next, a floating, angelic figure with long flowing hair passes through a cathedral-like arched crystal tunnel.






(The White Hole)


 The probe ship carrying Avindra, Shiraj, Hemant and V.I.N.CENT then emerges from a white hole and is last seen flying through space towards a planet near a bright star. The white hole takes him to the next level of cosmic world which has some unknown reason to define…






<YEAR 2060>




Nine years after the mysterious failure of the Discovery One mission to Jupiter in 2051, which resulted in the deaths of four astronauts and the disappearance of David Bowman, the fiasco was blamed on Dr.Heywood Floyd, who resigned his position as head of the National Council for Astronautics. While an international dispute causes tensions between the United States and the India, both nations prepare space missions to determine what happened to the Discovery. Although the Indian ship, the ANTRIKSH, will be ready before the American spacecraft Discovery Two, the Indians need American astronauts to help board the Discovery and investigate the malfunction of the ship's sentient computer, HAL 9000, which caused the disaster. The US government agrees to a joint mission when it is determined that Discovery will crash into Jupiter's moon Io before Discovery Two is ready. Floyd, along with Discovery designer Walter Curnow and HAL 9000's creator Dr. Chandra, joins the Indian mission.

Upon arriving at Jupiter, the crew detects signs of life on Jupiter's seemingly barren moon Europa. They send an unmanned probe down to Europa to investigate the unusual readings, but just as it finds the source, a mysterious energy burst destroys the probe and its data. The "burst" then flies toward Jupiter. The Indians believe the burst was simply electrostatic build-up, but Floyd suspects it was a warning to stay away from Europa.

After surviving a dangerous braking maneuver around Jupiter's upper atmosphere, the ANTRIKSH crew find the abandoned Discovery floating in space. Curnow reactivates the ship and Chandra restarts HAL, who had been deactivated by Dave Bowman before his disappearance nine years earlier. Also nearby is the giant alien Monolith that the Discovery was originally sent to investigate. Cosmonaut Bupa Mukherjee travels to the Monolith in an EVA pod, at which point the Monolith briefly opens with a burst of energy, sending Max's pod spinning off into space. On Earth, Dave Bowman, now an incorporeal being that exists inside the Monolith, appears on his wife's television screen and wishes her farewell. He also visits his terminally ill mother just before she dies.

On the Discovery, Chandra discovers the reason for HAL's malfunction: The National Security Council ordered HAL to conceal from Discovery's crew the fact that the mission was about the Monolith; this conflicted with HAL's basic programming of open, accurate processing of information, causing him to suffer the computer equivalent of a paranoid mental. Although the order bears his signature, Floyd is outraged that this was done without his knowledge.

On Earth, tensions between the United States and the India escalate to a state of war. The Americans are instructed to leave the Indian spaceship ANTRIKSH and move to the Discovery, with both crews ordered not to communicate with each other. Both crews plan to leave Jupiter separately when a launch window opens in several weeks; however, Bowman appears to Floyd and says it is imperative that everybody leave within two days. Stunned by Bowman's appearance, Floyd returns to the ANTRIKSH to confer with Captain Tanya Garg, who remains skeptical. The Monolith then suddenly disappears, and a growing black spot appears on Jupiter itself. The spot is actually a vast group of Monoliths that are constantly multiplying. The Monoliths begin shrinking Jupiter's volume, increasing the planet's density, and modifying its chemical composition. This convinces the two crews that they must leave soon. Since neither ship can reach Earth with an early departure, they work together to use the Discovery as a booster rocket for the ANTRIKSH, though it means the Discovery's and HAL's destruction. Bowman's voice is heard once again as he speaks to HAL and tells him that they will soon be together after he transmits one final message to Earth:













The Monoliths engulf Jupiter, causing nuclear fusion that transforms the planet into a small star. Discovery is consumed in the blast after the ANTRIKSH breaks away to safety. The new star's miraculous appearance inspires American and Indian leaders to seek peace. Europa gradually transforms from an icy wasteland to a humid jungle covered with plant life. A Monolith stands in the primeval Europa swamp, waiting for intelligent life forms to evolve.













In the mid-25th century, Mankind has reached a point in technological advancement that enables colonization of the far reaches of the universe. Armed with artificially intelligent "Thermo stellar Triggering Devices", the scout ship "ISRO250" and its crew have been alone in space for 20 years on a mission to destroy "unstable planets" which might threaten future colonization of other planets.

The ship's crew consists of Lt.Amrit Lal (helmsman, and initially, second-in-command), Sgt.Pradeep Sangwant (bombardier), Cpt. Charlie (navigator), and Toby (target specialist). "ISRO250" Commander Rishi Raghvansh was killed during hyperdrive as a result of an electrical short behind his rear seat panel, but remains onboard ship in a state of cryogenic suspension. The crew members perform their jobs with abject boredom, as the tedium of their tasks over 20 years has driven them "around the bend." The "ISRO250" ship is in a constant state of deterioration and frequent system malfunctions (for example, a radiation leak which is not repairable, their cargo of intelligent talking bombs lowering from their bomb bay without a command to do so, an explosion destroying their sleeping quarters, the food processing computer repeatedly serving chicken-flavored liquid meals, and a storage bay "self-destructing" and destroying the ship's entire supply of toilet paper), and only the soft-spoken female voice of the ship's computer for company. They have created distractions for themselves: Amrit Lal, formerly a surfer from Malabar Beach, Vishakapatnam, has constructed a musical bottle organ; Toby spends his time in the ship's observation dome, content to watch the universe go by Charlie obsessively trims his moustache, enjoys smoking cigars, and shoots targets with the ship's emergency laser rifle in a corridor; while Pradeep plays practical jokes on the crew members, maintains a video diary, and has adopted a ship's mascot in the form of a mischievous "beachball"-like alien who refuses to stay in a storage room, forcing Pradeep to chase it around the ship. With regard to Pradeep, he may not actually be "Sgt. Pradeep" at all in his video diary, he states he is liquid fuel specialist Laxman Jain, who inadvertently took the "real" Sgt. Pradeep's place on the mission. It is unclear, however, whether or not this is a paranoid illusory fiction Sgt Pradeep has created, due to his prolonged time working in deep space.

En route to their next target (the Veil Nebula[2]), the "Dark Star" is hit by a bolt of electromagnetic energy during a storm, resulting in yet another on-board malfunction, with "Thermo stellar Bomb 20" receiving an order to deploy. With some difficulty, the ship's computer convinces Bomb 20 that the order was in error, and persuades the bomb to disarm itself and return to the bomb bay. Toby notes the malfunction, and decides to investigate the fault (to the complete disinterest of his crew mates), and discovers a damaged communications laser in the emergency airlock while the crew is engaging their next bombing run. While attempting to repair it the laser malfunctions, blinding Toby and knocking him unconscious, inadvertently triggering a more serious problem, causing extensive damage to the ship's main computer, and damaging the bomb release mechanism on Bomb 20.

Due to the damaged ship's computer, the crew members discover that they cannot activate the release mechanism and attempt to abort the drop. To make matters worse, after two prior accidental deployments, and intent on exploding as it was programmed to do, Bomb 20 refuses to disarm or abort the countdown sequence. As Pradeep and Charlie try to talk the bomb out of blowing up underneath the ship, Dr Amrit lal revives Commander Rishi, who advises him to talk to the bomb, and to teach the bomb the rudiments of phenomenology. After donning a space suit and exiting the ship to approach the bomb directly, Dr Amrit lal engages in a philosophical conversation with Bomb 20 until it decides to abort its countdown and retreat to the bomb bay for further contemplation. Disaster appears to have been averted, but when attempting to re-enter the ship, Dr Amrit Lal inadvertently jettisons Toby out of the airlock. As Dr Amrit lal tries to rescue the now-conscious Toby as he floats away from the "Dark Star," Pradeep addresses the bomb over the intercom in another attempt to disarm it.

Unfortunately, Dr Amrit lal has mistakenly taught the bomb Cartesian doubt and, as a result, Bomb 20 determines that it can only trust itself and not external input. Convinced that only it exists, and that its sole purpose in life is to explode, Bomb 20 states "Let there be light," and promptly detonates. Pradeep and Charlie are killed instantly. Commander Rishi is jettisoned into space encased in ice, and Toby and Dr Amrit lal are blown in opposite trajectories(Directions), drifting away from each other. Toby drifts into the Phoenix Asteroids (a cluster of glowing asteroids he has long had a fascination with), destined to circumnavigate the universe for eternity. As Dr amrit lal loses contact with Toby, he sees that he is falling toward the unstable planet. Realizing he will burn in the atmosphere, he drifts into debris from the "ISRO250," finds an appropriately surfboard-shaped hunk of debris, and "surfs" down into the atmosphere of the planet, dying as a falling star………

After Falling In space ISRO250 falls down very quickly To the Barren Land of The unstable planet.




After the disappearance of his first human spacecraft SURYABHASKAR the Central government secretly dismantles this mission and hides this assignment from the International Media and rest of the world.

But since USA,Russia,China,Japan And all big money countries take secretly keeping interest in this mission and many of them wants to know about it.

BBC, KGN All the bulletins has been smashed with news of disappearance of the spacecraft. UN receives some confidential files of this mission secretly through his resources in India. So there is a pressure on Indian government to disclose this matter publicity in a very short time of span.





ISRO decides to go back to space where he can find His first successful Human Spacecraft SURYABHASKAR which emerges into the black hole gravity...

Since he Design a new mission of the remaining team which came back in his other missions successfully. ISRO take back his old team of ANTRIKSH and ISRO250 to cover up this matter secretly.

All alliances are merged and go to space in that magnetic gravitational region where the SURYABHASKAR disappears...

The merged team is called as the **BHARAT RAKSHAN**

This team is works in two different groups same as the ANTRIKSH and ISRO250 alliances 










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