the lost spoon

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

it's a short story about a family member,


flying around on my spoon
i saw a colorful lutos flower
that had a big cocoon
that had been devoured 
as i got closer too it 
it seemed to be something differnt 
kinda like banana split
that was taking some supplement 
as the big white smoke hit my face
all i could see was colorful patterns 
that toke me out of space
and i floated to the ball of saturn 
the ice partical of the vegitation  
made me fall of my spoon
and i landed on starvation
now i just hope i can harvest the moon 

Submitted: March 30, 2012

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gimme a slice of what you're having for breakfast :)

Fri, March 30th, 2012 4:00pm


haha sadly nothing !!

Fri, March 30th, 2012 9:35am

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