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Submitted: June 04, 2008
Submitted: June 04, 2008
Submitted: June 04, 2008
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*tear* DANG IT! YOU ENDED IT! COME ON! POST MORE! O.O Please?
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As I said in my previous reply -you gave me new ispiration. The story will continue!
Just as the other commenter said. It's very well thought out. I love how you mixed the characters up though, bringing them from different parts of life. It's also very nice how you put a small part of the future into the story before you actually started the present story. It's really good! Keep it up!
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Thx. You just gave m new ispiration to write more!
Thx alot
ugh gah! I hate writting emotional stuff! >.< lol you were brave, you jumped right into it! That's awsome! It's hard to really express intense emotions in writting when in a novel =P But I love the plot as well, shadowrunners sound A.W.S.O.M.E. Well after reading my story I'm sure you know I get kind of obsessive over people in all black...love it...it's just so dar*cough* OK back to what I was saying, keep this up it sounds very interesting even with any grammar errors I followed along. I'm off to read the next chapters though, sorry for leaving you such a very very long comment. They can be a hassle to read.
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OMG I love long comments! They're usually positive :D
Thx anyways
I am intrigued with the story, but still a bit confused about the dark figure-who, what is it?...I am thinking it a figment of his imagination(his own shadow, maybe) or maybe he has a split personality....I will just have to find out-good job, Martin, on catching the attention of the reader, that will make us want to continue reading the story to find the answers to our questions....:D
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Jey! Thx very much for this. Well if you like it, there are 2 more chapters to go. Well, for now.. I'm planning to write more but I guess I'm the busy working guy for the summer... but I'll definetly write more!
yay go martin! you can do it! lol. great job! i cant wait to find out whether john successfully gets the key. =)
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Jay! I'm thankful for your comments, I really am :D
You gave me such a boost! I really want to write more but just dont have time to do it, jet. I WILL soon read your stuff. Thx again and cheers.
very well thought out. i cant wait to find out more about this whole 'shaddowrunner' thing. it sounds like an interesting concept. great job with this chapter. =)
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Hah!Glad you like it. There'll be more! hx
not much to complain about. a few grammar and spelling mistakes here and there. its a good start. =)
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Jei Thx. Sorry o reply so late, I had some problems :D
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