I see him now

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Vintage Publishing

Something I wrote back in 2011.

I see him now with different eyes,

I think he’s truly one of a kind.

I see him resting so fast asleep,

My admirations are far too deep.

Nothing else matters when he’s in pain,

My hurt becomes simply in vain.

I love him, yes, I really do,

My heart is shouting: ‘This statement’s true!’

And when he smiles I can see light,

He’s summer day and summer night.

I see him now and he’s for me,

With him I found who I could be.

Without his warmth, I feel this hole,

That eats my heart and kills my soul.

And when his lips come join with mine, our skins begin to intertwine.

I cannot bear to watch him leave,

I cannot bear his heart deceive.

His arms, his eyes—make my head spin, and joy is born from deep within.

I see him now, I see him all,

What happens now that I’m in love?

Submitted: April 28, 2017

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A very romantic poem, jaylisbeth. Full of passion, but also that sense of worry that accompanies an deep relationship. A very enjoyable read!

Fri, April 28th, 2017 6:06pm


Thank you very much. I am happy to report that I ended up marrying the guy lol.

Mon, May 1st, 2017 8:35am


I'm so glad that you were able to marry your sweetheart! I pray that he will always treat you like a Princess, & that you two will always be happy!

Wed, May 24th, 2017 10:27pm


I really appreciate it. I am hoping for the same outcome.

Wed, May 24th, 2017 3:45pm


This poem is speaking for you. All from the heart. Nice poem.

Sat, September 9th, 2017 7:39am


Thank you very much :)

Sat, September 9th, 2017 1:34pm


I thought for sure that you were talking about me...! LOL, JK! No, I thought you were talking about your child, until the very end! I love this wonderful tribute to a man that must be pretty special for you to love him so! He's a pretty lucky soul!

Sat, September 9th, 2017 10:44am


Haha! Thank you very much, Spy. I wrote this a year into our relationship, one of my first poems for him.

Sat, September 9th, 2017 1:33pm

Melancholic Wisdom

Lovely poem filled to the brim with emotion. You captured the feeling of falling in love perfectly, nice work :)

Sun, September 10th, 2017 4:38am


Thank you so much!

Sun, September 10th, 2017 2:18pm

Rehmat Tanzila

So romantic Jaylisbeth! I'm head over heels for your poetry :* :* kisses and hugs

Mon, October 16th, 2017 6:03am


Thank you, my love

Mon, October 16th, 2017 5:11am

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