The Miniture World

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I thought of this poem by reading a book call "Nature"

The Miniture World

If i was very, very small the jointed Grasses would be tall, & i would climb up them like trees to wave to passing honey bees. & then i think i'd like to try to ride a big Blue Dragon-fly. Zig-zag around the sky like mad then land it on a lilly-pad. when i was hungry i would eat Daisy petals, Mint & meadow sweet. maybe i'd leap frog real frogs! or dive off mossy logs Deep, cool & dim and with the little tadpoles I'll swim. Of cose it would be very, very  scary metting spiders black & hairy!   and those giant drops of dew, i guess i'll have to doge them too! But i would be sooo nice too know the hidden paths where pixes go, & OH! so good to spend my days exploring secret forest ways.... and when i was too tired to roam I would hire a bettle & ride home!


Submitted: October 19, 2012

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darkworm666

great show of emotion in this, keep up the good work.

Sun, October 21st, 2012 12:49am

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Yes i put heaps of emotion in this poem But did you notice that i put "Nature" into this poem (i like Nature)

Sat, October 20th, 2012 6:44pm

darkworm666

i noticed that, its in a lot of what you write, its good though, you need a signiture inside the poems, your is nature, its really beautifuly done, you should be happy

Sun, October 21st, 2012 2:28am

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i am happy & you are very nice *blushes* thank you

Sat, October 20th, 2012 7:32pm

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