II: My bodys hot, Your lips are cold, The Blood is thick, warm as it slides down my skin. My night moves forth, Yours stays at a halt. The dirt is wet; soaked with blood. Oh god forgive me for what I have done.
These are just my rough rough drafts of the peices dont be to harsh haha thanks for checking it out Jb
Submitted: May 07, 2010
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very dark, very good.
Fri, May 7th, 2010 3:51pm
Thanks for the input
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very dark, very good.
Fri, May 7th, 2010 3:51pm