Our Twisted Fate

Poem by: JBrewer

Summary

I have thought on this one for about 2 weeks now. Maybe longer. I have had people asking me to write happier poems, different poems and others that tell me I am great with twisting dark and sad poetry. So with this one I wanted to do something a little different, I wanted to go dark, with a twist. I hope you all enjoy.

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Submitted: June 18, 2013

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Everyday I stand alone, 
I fight with you
in your evil ways. 
No matter how many times
I fix you,
my effort never stays. 
 
I gently try
to figure you out,
taking things very slow. 
And even when 
I get frustrated,
I keep my voice a calming low. 
 
But you're a twisted thing
that never gives,
I'm pretty sure that I hate you. 
As I raise my voice
I begin to curse, 
I'm pretty sure you hate me too. 
 
Then finally
I had to much with you,
"Enough" I screamed! 
And "ENOUGH"
I yelled.
As the blade gleamed. 
 
The laces slowly fell,
it's over
it's done
I won
There isn't a knot
in my shoe anymore. 
 
Jeremy Brewer
Poetry Embrace
 


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I have thought on this one for about 2 weeks now. Maybe longer. I have had people asking me to write happier poems, different poems and others that tell me I am great with twisting dark and sad poetry. So with this one I wanted to do something a little different, I wanted to go dark, with a twist. I hope you all enjoy.

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