The Phone Ringing

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic

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The phone ringing,
The girl nodding,
The phone ringing,
The smoke rising.

The phone ringing,
The engine humming,
The phone ringing,
The speed increasing.

The phone ringing,
The people helping,
The phone ringing,
The hours waiting.

The phone ringing,
The glass smashing,
The phone ringing,
The people staring.

The phone ringing,
The wrong person speaking.


Submitted: January 10, 2010

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Comments

Helena Parris

I got it. This is chilling! Great piece!

Sun, January 10th, 2010 9:02pm

flylash

hey I understood it !
or at least my interpretation of it haha
but it was intriguing (:

Mon, January 11th, 2010 3:31am

kaykay7720

I might be slow... I really do wish i understood it. It would seem to me as if it took some serious creativety.

Mon, January 11th, 2010 1:46pm

JCalder

Wow this is so weird I thought that I wouldnt even get one reader as I only posted it yesterday it didnt even take me long to write it because we had this day of off lessons in school and we done loads of workshops so I had a bit of inspiration maybe I'll put some more up for people to read. (:

Mon, January 11th, 2010 6:46pm

MelissaWatkins

I like it alot

Mon, January 11th, 2010 9:26pm

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