Natural Cycle

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Always beginning again.

The wind sighs;

I breathe it in.

 

The wolf cries;

I hear its din.

 

A bird flees;

I feel its wind.

 

The moon rises;

I see its grin.

 

A man dies;

We begin again.


Submitted: March 20, 2019

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hullabaloo22

Never-ending...Nice one, Jeff.

Wed, March 20th, 2019 7:47pm

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Thank you, Hully!

Thu, March 21st, 2019 11:42am

tom mcmullen

Good one Jeff, Samsara!

Thu, March 21st, 2019 7:50am

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Indeed! It's a never-ending cycle of pain. Thanks for reading!

Thu, March 21st, 2019 11:43am

Keke Serene

This is a creepy poem. And the cover picture isn't helping. XD Nice imagery. :)
Very atmospheric- and halloween-esque.

Fri, March 22nd, 2019 3:33pm

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Thanks! I don't see how it's creepy, but I guess the imagery and briefness of the lines sets a certain mood. This piece feels very cliche; nothing really original about it. But it was a nice change to write something simple and quick.
Thanks for giving it a read, sweetheart.

Tue, March 26th, 2019 11:03am

Christy Writes

As dark as this might come off, this cycle is actually not too far off. People die every day so... xD

Mon, March 25th, 2019 3:08pm

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All things come to an end. It's the only way to move forward in all aspects.
Thank you for reading, sweetheart.

Tue, March 26th, 2019 11:05am

jmm424

Nice job, Jeff.

Mon, March 25th, 2019 11:33pm

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Thank you for reading, JMM.

Tue, March 26th, 2019 11:11am

jaylisbeth

The neverending cycle, my friend. Brilliant write.

Sat, March 30th, 2019 3:52am

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Thank you!

Mon, April 1st, 2019 1:10pm

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