Another poem about my lost love...trying to move on, but I am just here frozen in time.

I know it’s time for me to move on,

Too much time wasted alone,

But could somebody please tell that to my heart?

How do you go forward after your whole world is torn apart?

I want to heal-

I want to find something good and real.

I want to love again-

But how can I do that when I feel like my life has reached the end?

I no longer  feel anything,

I remember  the way my heart skipped a beat when the phone would ring.

I loved hearing the sound of your voice,

And a moment in your arms was a reason to rejoice.

There was so much love,

Yet still I guess it just wasn’t enough.

Frozen in time…

Trapped in a dark hole in my heart and mind.

Sadness raging through my veins…

I hear my heart beating although with you it remains.

Suddenly it’s all so clear,

No wonder I am all alone here.

I can’t move on and love again,

I can’t come back from where I have been.

I love you,

God help me-I do,

I can’t give away something that isn’t mine-

You have my heart and I remain here-frozen in time.

Submitted: May 02, 2007

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Weldone! this is great emotion on the page!

Wed, May 2nd, 2007 3:42pm


Thank you so much for the comment. It means a lot to me.

Wed, May 2nd, 2007 8:49am

Darth Anarchus

very intense, great poem...

Wed, May 2nd, 2007 4:22pm


Thank you for the comment. I appreciate everything that everybody says.

Wed, May 2nd, 2007 11:47am

Jayne Crosby

Wow I know how that feels. Everyone says time heals all but there are some things that get harder with time. Letting go can be one of the hardest things a person can do. Sometimes waiting to do it only causes more pain. I waited maybe hoping that he would come back but it only hurt. Don't be afraid to let go. Build yourself back up and move on to something better. He isn't worth wasting your time on if he doesn't love you back.

Wed, May 2nd, 2007 5:34pm


Thank you so much for the comment and you made a great point. My head hears you, but I'm not so sure my heart is listening.

Wed, May 2nd, 2007 11:49am


feel every word... in the middle of this right now... as I am "Left To Ponder"... thank you for this piece... it put a few things in perspective for me...

Wed, May 2nd, 2007 7:42pm


Thank you so much for the comment. I read that poem and I loved it. I can completely relate.

Wed, May 2nd, 2007 1:04pm


Very nice, i can relate you love someone and then ... well things go wrong and you are stuck to wonder ... wow what happened. another wondrous piece of work, you are an excellent writer.

Wed, September 12th, 2007 3:33am


Thank you so much. Once again sorry it took so long to write back. Still catching up

Tue, February 5th, 2008 11:34am

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